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    • FERN HILL

      by Dylan Thomas


      Now as I was young and easy under the apple boughs

      About the lilting house and happy as the grass was green,

      The night above the dingle starry,

      Time let me hail and climb

      Golden in the heydays of his eyes,

      And honoured among wagons I was prince of the apple towns

      And once below a time I lordly had the trees and leaves

      Trail with daisies and barley

      Down the rivers of the windfall light.



      And as I was green and carefree, famous among the barns

      About the happy yard and singing as the farm was home,

      In the sun that is young once only,

      Time let me play and be

      Golden in the mercy of his means,

      And green and golden I was huntsman and herdsman, the calves

      Sang to my horn, the foxes on the hills barked clear and cold,

      And the sabbath rang slowly

      In the pebbles of the holy streams.



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      THE LAKE ISLE OF INNISFREE
      by William Butler Yeats

      I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
      And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made;
      Nine bean rows will I have there, a hive for the honey bee,
      And live alone in the bee-loud glade.

      And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
      Dropping from the veils of the morning to where the cricket sings;
      There midnight's all a glimmer, and noon a purple glow,
      And evening full of the linnet's wings.

      I will arise and go now, for always night and day
      I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the shore;
      While I stand on the roadway, or on the pavements gray,
      I hear it in the deep heart's core.



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    June 13, 2006

    My Children: Test Audience

    One of the best things—maybe THE best—about writing children's books for a living is getting to try out your stories on your own children first. When they get caught up in the tale you're reading and forget that you're their mom and you wrote this, when you get to the end of a chapter and they beg for just one more and you laugh and say there ISN'T any more, I haven't written it yet and they wring their hands and implore you to just TELL the next bit, oh pleeeease, you have to!—that's when you know you have the very best job (or combination of jobs) in the whole world.

    (As opposed to, say, when you're writing out giant checks to various medical practitioners because as freelancers you and your husband no longer enjoy the cushy benefits you did when on staff at giant publishing conglomerations.)

    Lately I've been wondering how many other children's book authors out there are revelling in the same delicious experience. I can think of one. Like mine, I believe that particular author's flesh-and-blood critics are brutally frank, which is of course the most useful kind of critic you can have. That's why children make the best test audience; if they fidget or go "huh?" you know you've got some polishing to do. But when you get it right, oh, there is nothing, nothing better than the sight of their heads thrown back in laughter, the sound of their belly laughs in all the right places.

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    Well, I don't write fiction (yet!), but most definitely my own kids play a part in helping me to know if I'm doing well. For me, it's the activities. Just the other day I was working on creating a faux stained glass activity for an upcoming book, and my kids' reactions were great: "Wow! That's cool. Can I do one?"

    Of course, they can also be brutally honest: "THAT is really dumb." Anything that generates a statement like that does not make it into a book!

    Someday - someday - maybe I'll have them begging for more of a story, but for now I'm happy to be doing something that allows them to be involved and shows them that their opinions really do matter.

    I don't have any kids, but I do have a little sister. I find her useful not just on my own writing but on evaluating books for publication. Occassionally, if I can't quite make up my mind, before I go to an acquisitions meeting I'll email a copy of the first 10 or so pages. If she's into it, we've got a winner. If she's not I want to know why. She very frank and holds nothing back. I've found that if I send my own stuff this way, she tends to be more honest. Of course, she's 12 now and will soon be moving into YA. I'll miss her frank mid-grade advice, just like I now miss her chapter book appraisals. Some of them were down right eye-opening.

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